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Essence of Life - Page 222

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*read left to right
This page and the next were never really planed, this chapter was meant to end with the previous page. But that made the chapter a little short, so I added two pages. 


Thanks for reading this update,



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AQuinis's avatar
Panel 2: those (doesn't need an 's', the word already indications more than one)
You're doing the capital letter after the comma still. You don't need a capital letter after a comma.
Panel 4: Just 'aww'. No 'h' needed. 
Panel 5: when I finish it, I'll let
Panel 6: Now that I think about it, there is something (and no '?' needed at the end. Just a full stop).